Violet reminds me of myself because she’s outgoing. I’m always talking to someone and I’m really outgoing also. Violet still knows how to have fun even though she’s dead. I may not be dead but I am fun to be around when I’m with my friends and or family. Violet does not like being told what to do she like her freedom. I never like being told what to do. So I think if I was friends with Violet we would get along perfectly. Violet is always by her Olivia’s side because of everything Violet did Olivia is know doing. It’s kind of like my little sister where she is always by me because she is growing up and she needs some advice because I’ve already been through that. So Violet is like a spitting image of me.
this is my redo on the secon jurnal. I rely don’t understand why his dad would betray his son by helping some other person. But, when his son asks him to help him with his baseball skills. He turns him down and says that he is busy even though he is just sitting on the couch doing nothing. But when a short stop from a different team comes over to help he tells them that he will be out in a little bit. I also don’t understand why he diside to keep his anger in even though he see that it his tearing him and his father further and further apart.
this is my redo for my frist blog. If I where Hutch right now I would let my father know that I am not happy with what he is doing, and that I feel like running away from this house and this life. And if he still did not help me I would run away to my best friend’s house. Then after a month or so I would ask him if he wanted and if he did I would ask him if he would help me with me baseball skills. I would also let mom know what my planes are and ask her if she can keep it a secret and that we would stay in touch but, if dad picks up I’m going to hang up.
This is the responsive blog to Jon’s redo for his first blog. I think that running away is not a good idea at all. Things will most likely get better. The thing between Hutch and his dad maybe because of the past but, with talking to each other things could get better just like I said. You should never take your parents for granted. I was mad at my dad for along time because he had hurt my mom. I’m sorry but, I do not agree with hanging up on the person because you’re mad at them. You should slowly tell them how you feel and then maybe things will smooth out. Just don’t let your family fall away like that. Don’t let a silly fight ruin your families relationship.
I think that the relationship between Olivia and Soren is interesting because they have to sneak around. Soren had just broke up with his girlfriend Calla, Which is Olivia's best friend. After inviting Olivia he starts showing that he likes her. I can't wait to see how there relationship grows out, as Olivia starts to feel a spark other than just friends. Olivia likes Soren but, will not admit it. Her sister Violet knows that she does and keeps calling them to hanging out dates. Olivia tells her it isn't a date there just friends and thats it.
In my book, 90 Minutes in Heaven, I wish that the author would have included more details while they were in the ambulance. For example, when they went back and forth from one hospital to the other I would to like to have seen what they were doing to Mark. I also wish that the author would have included what the wife said when she first saw Mark get out of the ambulance. Another thing that I would have liked to have seen is when the doctor was checking him over what he actually thought what was going to happen to Mark. These are just a couple of things that I would change in my book.
This is my redo to my first blog. If I were Olivia right know i would most likely try to live my life. Instead of being all sad and depressed because my sister died. Yea its going to be sad and depressing at first but not after awhile. Im pretty sure if her sister was still there she would tell her no matter what happens you have to move on. To me there is no point of sitting around because a relitive died.
This is my redo to my first slash sencond blog. Olivia reminds me of my friend katie. Katie is always scared to speak her mind. Olivia is scared to do anything basically just like shopping, she wont do that and either will my friend katie. I love katie I do but, she is scared to do anything. When I left Waupun she was finally getting used to people. Just like Olivia.
I had to say that I like the book I’m reading, The Chronicles of Narnia: The Voyage of the Dawn Treader. The places in the books just give a getting imagery world. You can just picture it in your mind. Even it is a fantasy book; it has a good setting of the battles, the risks, and the relationships of the characters of the book. Also, some of the characters you can relate yourself to them.-Dayton
I really don't understand why the author started the book this way. I really don't want to read that much more because right now he is just complaining about how bad his life is and stuff. It sounds to me like this guy is depressed or something. I mean here is the first sentence "Sometimes, when I stand back and take a good look, I think my parents are ambassadors from hell.” Right about then is when I was like oh crap if I wanted to read a book about family problems I would have gotten a book that is about that. I really don’t know why the book is starting out so depressing.
In the book The Big Field by Mike Lupica I really dislike the idea of Hutch’s father helping other team mates more than he is with his son. I think that he should help them equally. I could understand if his son was better than the rest of the team. There is no reason for putting your son down because he does not play the position you played. I wish that the father would realize how his son feels.
The character I admire is Lord Drinian. He and I learn about the knowledge of ships. We prefer to give orders rather than revise them. We don’t have to use violence unless it’s necessary. We prefer to trust on others to help us on the toughest of times on the seas. I rather not to work for someone who royal, but Drinian can do that.-Dayton
I really don't understand Lori because she liked Sean then she liked Adam. I don't see why she has to be so confusing. The character I most admire would have to be Adam, because he has been by Lori's side since they were like 5. He is there through the ups and downs. Also when he is mad at Lori he will still listen to what she has to say. I think that Adam is a true friend to Lori.
I really don’t understand why there are so many abusers of the emergency system and of the drugs given. That makes me feel mad because YOU ARE GROWN UPS, NOT LITTLE KIDS come on people. There are so many people who want to go to the hospital for a free ride or because the nursing home smells funny or even because they want some company. In all the books I have read about paramedics there is about a quarter of that book talking about how they see these abusers daily or once a week. These people are not just homeless people. They are people who have a family or they are rich. Some of these people are psychos. Now that just makes me mad because these people do have a brain and they can use it but they don’t. Then the drugs abusers will call 911 so they can go to the ER and get another bottle of drugs. So these people just need to grow up!
I think the relationship between Lori and her brother is really interesting because they share everything together; they fight like normal brothers' and sisters. But in the end they make up. He watches out for her but in a kindve sneaky way, that she doesn't even notice he's watching her. That situation reminds me of me and my brothers because we are the same way. For example, they know everything about you and you don't even realize it.
I think the relationship between his dad and Kevin is interesting because they fight but yet they don't fight. They have a very weird relationship you know what I mean? They fight if Kevin doesn't something his father doesn't like but when his dad does something Kevin doesn't like it is like oh whatever to his dad. They have a weird relationship because Kevin said something and his mom said something how many pushup would your dad make you do for that she asked. Kevin said sometimes his dad hit the back of his head with his open hand not like really hard or anything just enough to get the point a crossed.
If I was Peter right now I would have blown up by now because he lives and works in an area where there is a lot of abusers and psychos. He has some guts and that is cool. Peter and his new partner Sandy are getting a lot of calls from people who are swallowing a whole bottle of pills at one time. That makes me feel sick to have all those pills at once. Then there are the psychos who are having their brains turned off and are doing dumb things like diving into two feet of water at the swimming pool and cracking their head open. These people need to TURN their brain on right now. That also makes me mad. These people are getting the attention that they are wanting then are dying because of it. SO TURN THEM ON!
The characters in my book are a little different them other characters in other books. So far Mark we only know a little bit about him. Mark works as a preacher and does a lot in the community. I think that he is a great person for what he does within the community. Also there is Eva, Marks wife she is very laid back until everything happened to Mark. She is there for him with everything and it really helps Mark with everything that has happened.
This character reminds me of my friend Ell because his parents were divorced. He decided to live with his dad, who does not have a lot of money compared to his mom. He did that so that people would look at him like a normal person, not a rich, fancy guy that could give his friends anything they wanted. Just like the main character in the book, he wants to show everyone that you can get away from everything and start up a new life, no matter how good life can be.
I like Jareth Sartoris because, in the way he fights and the way he thinks. Like in chapter 42 he taught Trig to fly a speeder. Or when he was taken capture by some survivors and let like three or four live to help him save everyone else in the parsecs he died him self, but saving him self. But in his bravery he saved everyone else from dying. That’s why I like Jareth Sartoris.
The character I admire the most is Trig Longo. For being ten years old he has a lot of guts to not kill him self from seeing all those things and not killing him self, or When he saw his older brother after he promised that they would see each other again. Trig did see his brother again but he was a zombie that’s right a zombie. And when he was flying the speeder when they where trying to get out of the Imperil Star Ship.
This part in the book is unrealistic because an Enchanted or witch turns into a big bird. I thought that, that wasn’t real because no one or anybody can really turn into a bird. The witch talks and tells her story about how she lost her children and husband in the fire storm. Also it wasn’t real because witches are not real and that magic isn’t real either. Then again, this was a good part in the book.
If I were Mr. Pike at this point, I would I was losing it by hearing the baby cry. Also because every time the nurse came there was no baby. I would think I was seeing things because of the ghosts. I would just seem every confused and lost all the time. I would probably get mad because of the baby crying and waking me up. That I would never get any sleep and would be tried all the time.
I dislike Mr. O’Donnell because he seems like he’s really bossy. I don’t like bossy people they are not fun to talk to and always wan. He told Ross to keep working in the rain and told him not to fall off the roof t stuff done. Also he doesn’t seem friendly. He also jokes around when it shouldn’t be a time too.
I dislike the people named the Horde. It’s mean how they can just destroy cities that are peaceful. I think it’s pretty lame that the Horde can’t show who they really are. Also, all Green is trying to do is save her love. In return, she lost him and is trying to find him again.
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ReplyDeleteViolet reminds me of myself because she’s outgoing. I’m always talking to someone and I’m really outgoing also. Violet still knows how to have fun even though she’s dead. I may not be dead but I am fun to be around when I’m with my friends and or family. Violet does not like being told what to do she like her freedom. I never like being told what to do. So I think if I was friends with Violet we would get along perfectly. Violet is always by her Olivia’s side because of everything Violet did Olivia is know doing. It’s kind of like my little sister where she is always by me because she is growing up and she needs some advice because I’ve already been through that. So Violet is like a spitting image of me.
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ReplyDeleteI rely don’t understand why his dad would betray his son by helping some other person. But, when his son asks him to help him with his baseball skills. He turns him down and says that he is busy even though he is just sitting on the couch doing nothing. But when a short stop from a different team comes over to help he tells them that he will be out in a little bit. I also don’t understand why he diside to keep his anger in even though he see that it his tearing him and his father further and further apart.
this is my redo for my frist blog.
ReplyDeleteIf I where Hutch right now I would let my father know that I am not happy with what he is doing, and that I feel like running away from this house and this life. And if he still did not help me I would run away to my best friend’s house. Then after a month or so I would ask him if he wanted and if he did I would ask him if he would help me with me baseball skills. I would also let mom know what my planes are and ask her if she can keep it a secret and that we would stay in touch but, if dad picks up I’m going to hang up.
This is the responsive blog to Jon’s redo for his first blog. I think that running away is not a good idea at all. Things will most likely get better. The thing between Hutch and his dad maybe because of the past but, with talking to each other things could get better just like I said. You should never take your parents for granted. I was mad at my dad for along time because he had hurt my mom. I’m sorry but, I do not agree with hanging up on the person because you’re mad at them. You should slowly tell them how you feel and then maybe things will smooth out. Just don’t let your family fall away like that. Don’t let a silly fight ruin your families relationship.
ReplyDeleteI think that the relationship between Olivia and Soren is interesting because they have to sneak around. Soren had just broke up with his girlfriend Calla, Which is Olivia's best friend. After inviting Olivia he starts showing that he likes her. I can't wait to see how there relationship grows out, as Olivia starts to feel a spark other than just friends. Olivia likes Soren but, will not admit it. Her sister Violet knows that she does and keeps calling them to hanging out dates. Olivia tells her it isn't a date there just friends and thats it.
ReplyDeleteIn my book, 90 Minutes in Heaven, I wish that the author would have included more details while they were in the ambulance. For example, when they went back and forth from one hospital to the other I would to like to have seen what they were doing to Mark. I also wish that the author would have included what the wife said when she first saw Mark get out of the ambulance. Another thing that I would have liked to have seen is when the doctor was checking him over what he actually thought what was going to happen to Mark. These are just a couple of things that I would change in my book.
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ReplyDeleteThis is my redo to my first blog. If I were Olivia right know i would most likely try to live my life. Instead of being all sad and depressed because my sister died. Yea its going to be sad and depressing at first but not after awhile. Im pretty sure if her sister was still there she would tell her no matter what happens you have to move on. To me there is no point of sitting around because a relitive died.
ReplyDeleteThis is my redo to my first slash sencond blog. Olivia reminds me of my friend katie. Katie is always scared to speak her mind. Olivia is scared to do anything basically just like shopping, she wont do that and either will my friend katie. I love katie I do but, she is scared to do anything. When I left Waupun she was finally getting used to people. Just like Olivia.
ReplyDeleteI had to say that I like the book I’m reading, The Chronicles of Narnia: The Voyage of the Dawn Treader. The places in the books just give a getting imagery world. You can just picture it in your mind. Even it is a fantasy book; it has a good setting of the battles, the risks, and the relationships of the characters of the book. Also, some of the characters you can relate yourself to them.-Dayton
ReplyDeleteI really don't understand why the author started the book this way. I really don't want to read that much more because right now he is just complaining about how bad his life is and stuff. It sounds to me like this guy is depressed or something. I mean here is the first sentence "Sometimes, when I stand back and take a good look, I think my parents are ambassadors from hell.” Right about then is when I was like oh crap if I wanted to read a book about family problems I would have gotten a book that is about that. I really don’t know why the book is starting out so depressing.
ReplyDeleteIn the book The Big Field by Mike Lupica I really dislike the idea of Hutch’s father helping other team mates more than he is with his son. I think that he should help them equally. I could understand if his son was better than the rest of the team. There is no reason for putting your son down because he does not play the position you played. I wish that the father would realize how his son feels.
ReplyDeleteThe character I admire is Lord Drinian. He and I learn about the knowledge of ships. We prefer to give orders rather than revise them. We don’t have to use violence unless it’s necessary. We prefer to trust on others to help us on the toughest of times on the seas. I rather not to work for someone who royal, but Drinian can do that.-Dayton
ReplyDeleteI really don't understand Lori because she liked Sean then she liked Adam. I don't see why she has to be so confusing. The character I most admire would have to be Adam, because he has been by Lori's side since they were like 5. He is there through the ups and downs. Also when he is mad at Lori he will still listen to what she has to say. I think that Adam is a true friend to Lori.
ReplyDeleteI really don’t understand why there are so many abusers of the emergency system and of the drugs given. That makes me feel mad because YOU ARE GROWN UPS, NOT LITTLE KIDS come on people. There are so many people who want to go to the hospital for a free ride or because the nursing home smells funny or even because they want some company. In all the books I have read about paramedics there is about a quarter of that book talking about how they see these abusers daily or once a week. These people are not just homeless people. They are people who have a family or they are rich. Some of these people are psychos. Now that just makes me mad because these people do have a brain and they can use it but they don’t. Then the drugs abusers will call 911 so they can go to the ER and get another bottle of drugs. So these people just need to grow up!
ReplyDeleteI think the relationship between Lori and her brother is really interesting because they share everything together; they fight like normal brothers' and sisters. But in the end they make up. He watches out for her but in a kindve sneaky way, that she doesn't even notice he's watching her. That situation reminds me of me and my brothers because we are the same way. For example, they know everything about you and you don't even realize it.
ReplyDeleteI think the relationship between his dad and Kevin is interesting because they fight but yet they don't fight. They have a very weird relationship you know what I mean? They fight if Kevin doesn't something his father doesn't like but when his dad does something Kevin doesn't like it is like oh whatever to his dad. They have a weird relationship because Kevin said something and his mom said something how many pushup would your dad make you do for that she asked. Kevin said sometimes his dad hit the back of his head with his open hand not like really hard or anything just enough to get the point a crossed.
ReplyDeleteIf I was Peter right now I would have blown up by now because he lives and works in an area where there is a lot of abusers and psychos. He has some guts and that is cool. Peter and his new partner Sandy are getting a lot of calls from people who are swallowing a whole bottle of pills at one time. That makes me feel sick to have all those pills at once. Then there are the psychos who are having their brains turned off and are doing dumb things like diving into two feet of water at the swimming pool and cracking their head open. These people need to TURN their brain on right now. That also makes me mad. These people are getting the attention that they are wanting then are dying because of it. SO TURN THEM ON!
ReplyDeleteThe characters in my book are a little different them other characters in other books. So far Mark we only know a little bit about him. Mark works as a preacher and does a lot in the community. I think that he is a great person for what he does within the community. Also there is Eva, Marks wife she is very laid back until everything happened to Mark. She is there for him with everything and it really helps Mark with everything that has happened.
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ReplyDeleteI like Jareth Sartoris because, in the way he fights and the way he thinks. Like in chapter 42 he taught Trig to fly a speeder. Or when he was taken capture by some survivors and let like three or four live to help him save everyone else in the parsecs he died him self, but saving him self. But in his bravery he saved everyone else from dying. That’s why I like Jareth Sartoris.
ReplyDeleteThe character I admire the most is Trig Longo. For being ten years old he has a lot of guts to not kill him self from seeing all those things and not killing him self, or When he saw his older brother after he promised that they would see each other again. Trig did see his brother again but he was a zombie that’s right a zombie. And when he was flying the speeder when they where trying to get out of the Imperil Star Ship.
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ReplyDeleteIf I were Mr. Pike at this point, I would I was losing it by hearing the baby cry. Also because every time the nurse came there was no baby. I would think I was seeing things because of the ghosts. I would just seem every confused and lost all the time. I would probably get mad because of the baby crying and waking me up. That I would never get any sleep and would be tried all the time.
ReplyDeleteI dislike Mr. O’Donnell because he seems like he’s really bossy. I don’t like bossy people they are not fun to talk to and always wan. He told Ross to keep working in the rain and told him not to fall off the roof t stuff done. Also he doesn’t seem friendly. He also jokes around when it shouldn’t be a time too.
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